RELEASE: Royalty's Legions Lore

Royalty

The Aussie
I worked on this for two weeks. Could of made it longer and more "rich" but it already is 13oo words as it is.

I am happy for the devs to use bits of this or all of this (very unlikely) for the official Lore which they are presumably working on.

I was going to original paste the story here but it was way too cluttered.

Please note:
Don't argue about the fact that Atlas is an outrider. He didn't need a shitload of armour to protect his balls.

This is not the official Legions Lore

Don't start rage swearing at me because you don't like it. Feel free to make constructive comments

And lastly: There is a "like" button. It is meant to be used. ;)

Enjoy:

http://pastebin.com/Z9fgtY3g
 

Vox

Member
its pretty good. could do with more story in it. like some battles that were fought on different maps. but good job! :)
 

mausgang

Puzzlemaster
Interesting concept. I think a different way to go about doing the lore would be like how FireFall did their lore, which is a series of letters, journal entries and fake news articles that expose the story from different points of view.
 

Siantlark

Member
Well... Firefall had a reason for that. In their lore many of the things before and during the Firefall were lost or destroyed which meant that having soemthing from one source would be somewhat conspicuous.

For Legions we have nothing except it's former name. Fallen Empire Legions. Which could be about a Fallen empire or be nothing but a cool name.
 

w00tyou

Member
It's a very interesting lore that could have way more story-lines and POV's i think.

Overall, I think its is a great piece of creative writing. Lets see if bugs likes the Lore.
 

Immanent

Member
It's pretty damn good. I know you're busy, but to make it even better, MOAR MEAT. That 1300 word shell can easily become over 2000+ words of excellence. Keep it up.
 
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