Newblood video makers: General feedback thread

[MJ1284]

Due to unexpected revenue of new L:O videos on Tube I thought it would be nice to take a closer look at all these prominent video makers. So how about we compare all videos and analyze what parts we liked & what we didn't like and who had best presentation, NO BASHING THOUGH! We're here to hand out suggestions and maybe give little critism, but we don't want to make anyone feel bad. Reason why I disqualify my & phana's & disci's videos is because none of us are first-timers and hench we're not comparitable to these fellas.

In short, here's the rules I want everyone to abide:
- Name the video you liked the most and tell us what made you pick that specific video
- Please rate each video separately and list their cons & pros.
- No flaming/bashing!

Let's get started:
Legions: Overdrive - Awoken

My 1st montage. Couldn't go to work experience due to a hospital appointment so I spent a good 4-5 hours making a montage.... Hope you like it!

Legions: Overdrive - The Heavy

I made a preview about this one already so maybe some of you were waiting on it.
But as stuff suddenly pops up I had some fps problems.
I fixed them a few days ago and decided to finish this one.
So this weekend I recorded all of it and today edited it into one video.
Wich means it is rather short but I am busy here so just the best thing to do for me.

So yeah, first video, advice is always welcome!
Yes there is a warm filter thrown over it so colours are a bit different and I like that.
The video shows some mid-airs, cap and a little more.
So a short video about me playing, I just want to see if you guys think if the editing is done nicely.
I think I did.

Gogogo!

Legions: Overdrive - No Surrender

Heyy guyz my first montage is out. It is my first ever Montage and my first time using VegasPro10.
It took me 3 days ( cause I am a beginner with editing and stuff) to make. Hope you like it.

Oh by the way skip the end part after it says Made By : Pat22rick don't watch it cause I messed it up. If anyone got a good idea for me how to cut that bit out please say.

Here it is :

[WILL BE UPDATING OP AS NEW VIDEOS APPEAR]

 

[A2]

I like all of them, but if I had to pick one, it'd be Application-1's one. Why? because it was different. You don't generally see much montage of a Sentinel.
Coolniel's vid is really nice, but it would have been better if there were less effects, and a bit better fps, but either way, nice stuff.
Same goes for finesse's vid.
Looking forward to more interesting vids later on! <3

 

[stefygraff]

Noob in action!

 

[Armageddon]

Top pick: The Heavy
Reasons: Simple and classy and shows good use of the heavy class.
Pros: Nice sound track, Good footage and not a lot of crazy FX.
Cons: Too short, Y NO OD KILLZ APP1?!?

Awoken
Rating: 6/10
Pros: -:/:-
Cons: Too many fly-by map shots and not enough action, Huge text every 30 seconds.

No Surrender
Rating: 7/10
Pros: Fast paced, kept my attention and some good shots.
Cons: Too much Unce unce unce had to mute sound, too many FX used.

 

[Propkid]

I liked a 'teaser' montage that Shattered made a while ago, if I remember it ended with a really long MA on a capper on Moonshine. Would put it as #2 right after The Heavy

 

[Vox]

once i get more clips you might see a video from me on there

 

[Piggeh]

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I would have preferred an actual video - obviously it requires a certain level of hardware (as well as certain software). In addition, most of them were sub 100 midairs. Without the context provided by video, it's hard to judge the shots themselves.