Anyone up to giving me an opinion?

[Ivith]

I've got this monologue set up to start off my fan-fiction but I'm not sure if its good, whose up to reading a few paragraphs? I could use some feedback.

 

[WildFire]

Post it up in a file and let us all have a look at it I say.

 

[Ivith]

I had to put it in a .zip -.- sorry about that.

 

[DKnight556]

Really good.

 

[Ivith]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

 

[WildFire]

Was good, write more already!

 

[anak]

gah! weird filetypes! pastebin.com it.

 

[Ivith]

http://pastebin.com/892udMBm
here.

 

[Fissurez]

you obviously have a talent for this. carry on sir.

 

[MightySheep]

only skimmed first bit but i jizzed, this is nice stuff

 

[ColoredSpades]

Have you written any books by any chance?

 

[Vox]

awesome. would definately get this if you made it into a book and got it published

 

[Jmandied933]

hey could u set it as an older word format i cant read it cuz i got the 2000 version

 

[Gheist]

hey could u set it as an older word format i cant read it cuz i got the 2000 version

http://pastebin.com/892udMBm
here.

 

[Ivith]

Nah, I've got a story being composed aside from my fanfiction but this one is going to be for the Legions fanbase to read. The other one I'm hoping to publish.

 

[Abandoned]

So this is what you do in your spare time.. o:

It's really nice. I've been studying the "art of english" and this is just jizz.

 

[Dino]

Good stuff mate